1. Exposition
Axl and Stephanie met in the Rainbow Bar. They smoked, drank very happy and had a big big kiss during the party.
2. Rising Action
Later, they was married in a small church. But Axl forgot to bring the ring. Then, someone gave two rings to them but Stephaine, Slash came in, and gave them the rings and told Stephaine remember him because they were old sweetheart.
3. Climax
Axl and Stephanie cut the wedding cake when the wedding party began. And suddenly, Stephaine saw Slash. And think about what he said to herself in the church. So Stephaine danced with Slash because she thought she was owed him. However, it began to rain. Everyone hid and ran.
4. Falling Action
A man jump over the table and broke the wedding cake. Everyone was surprised. At the same time, Slash let Stephaine to go with him but Stephaine to say no.
5. Resolution
Later, someone told Axl his wife Stephaine and Slash were lovers when they were young. Axl was too angry for why Stephaine hadn't tell him. So he walked pass a gun shop and bought a gun to kill Stephaine and Slash. However, Slash kewn it and he bought a gun too. One night, Axl kied Stephaine at their house. Slash kenw it again. And killed himself after killed Axl.
What a sad ending~
Sunday, February 17, 2008
Story Writing
張貼者:
Yoyo Chan Yiu
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Yoyo, killing is always the climax; your climax and falling action should be a part of the rising action which builds to this important murder/suicide. The falling action and ending describe what happens AFTER this terrible event.
Your "too" sentence confused me. YOu can be too angry, but for who? I can't be too angry for why - why is not a person, thing or idea!
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