Lauries was a new Form. 1 student. He was very shy. He didn't talk to anyone. But at that time, someone was looking at him......
'Hi! Nice to meet you. I am Jo, what is your name?' , a girl called Jo talk to him. 'Nice to meet you, Jo. My name is Laurie.', he said softly. 'Can i make friends with you?', asked Jo. 'Oh, that a good idea! ', cried Laurie. At that moment, all students in the classroom were looking at him. His face turned into red and red. Jo thinked he was very cute. And Laurie think this girl was his goddess! Something in Lauries' mind......
Jo: tomboy, friendly
Laurie: bashful, very shy
Sunday, December 9, 2007
Journal Writng- Jo and Laurie Ch.1 Lauries' New Friend
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Yoyo, this is a good try. Can you describe the scene a bit more? Set it up for us - what happens before they start talking. What do other students think about this situation?
Please avoid...... I don't know what "......" is.
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