Dear father,
How are you? I am Amy, your youngest daughter.
Thank you for your bless. I know that your are very busy and very hard. But I hope that you can have some spare to come back home during the Christmas. If you back home, you will know i was change! I am not the willful girl anymore. I am a girl who can do things by myself!!!
Father, i hope to see you in this Christmas.
Your daughter,
Amy.
Sunday, November 11, 2007
A Letter To Father.
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Good try, Yoyo; you are the first person in the class to use "come" as a verb instead of the phrase "go back" though you failed to use it in the subsequent sentences. BACK is not a verb; COME is a verb. Father will come home; he may even come back home; but he will never BACK home.
But if he does come home, he will bless you; you shall receive his BLESSING!
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