In this year, my Mid-Autumn Festival was a terrible day~~~
First, i need to do many homework and need to practice singing~
Then i need to go to my grandmas' home to eat dinner and we went to the park which was nearby their home~~
And i cannot play computer games and check mails all day long.
I don't like this year's Mid-Autumn Festival.
Sunday, September 30, 2007
My Mid-Autumn Festival
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Yoyo, I'm sorry you had a terrible festival; please, don't take out your frustration on your sentences!
There are two full stops in your writing, while there are six ~~~~~~; what are these? Where else do you see them being used in English writing?
Yoyo, capitalize your I at the beginning of a sentence - you're important!
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